A Dream Like Mine


  1. avodka-kedavra:

Is this supposed to be a haiku about joint surgery?

Wrong syllable count, though that honestly doesn’t matter too much. However, a proper haiku should reference the seasons somehow. Here’s my attempt:My MAKOplasty—A spring in my step, for theWinter of my life.

    avodka-kedavra:

    Is this supposed to be a haiku about joint surgery?

    Wrong syllable count, though that honestly doesn’t matter too much. However, a proper haiku should reference the seasons somehow.

    Here’s my attempt:

    My MAKOplasty—
    A spring in my step, for the
    Winter of my life.